Name: LilP7 (Signed) · Date: Dec 03, 2022 - 03:19 pm · For: Chapter 7

Aaagghhh Kevin Lynch. Never liked the guy and yr story, making him the perp doesn't seem out of character somehow. Love the tender way DM deals with PG both b4 and after the incident. Great story, told with the right amount of respect for the 'heavy subject.' Well done
***oh yeah, I definetly second other reviewers in the more beating of KL...

Name: caroline (Anonymous) · Date: Jul 29, 2010 - 11:15 am · For: Chapter 7

Love this fic!

Name: leigh59 (Signed) · Date: Jul 13, 2008 - 06:47 pm · For: Chapter 7

This is a perfect ending to your story. It was wonderful to read.

Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: Jul 04, 2008 - 06:39 am · For: Chapter 2

hot so very hot . very well writen.

Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: Jul 03, 2008 - 11:50 pm · For: Chapter 6

Oh, wow! Was that the last chapter? Is there more coming?

Okay, one thing at a time. First of all, sorry, I messed up and forgot to log in. It's me, little_profiler, aka Caro. :)

I loved this chapter. I kinda felt sorry for Kevin even though I desperately wanted Morgan to punch him again (since I couldn't do it myself for obvious reasons). Weird, huh? And I loved Morgan's reactions the whole time. Of course, being a survivor himself he could understand her.

A great story (so far if there's more), very scary and touching and very, very well written. Moreover, thumbs up that you dared write about a topic like that. I really liked it.

Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: Jul 03, 2008 - 11:30 pm · For: Chapter 5

Okay, I admit I cheered when Morgan got to beat Kevin up! That was great!

My favorite part however was the 'reunion' with Derek. That was so sweet. I wonder if he's gonna find out about the baby and if so what he's gonna do.

Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: Jul 03, 2008 - 11:23 pm · For: Chapter 4

Okay, first of all, I totally didn't see the story going this way. Even though I thought that Kevin was too nice in your story - at first.

Then let me say, our minds might be connected. I just had a similar story in mind about Garcia being pregnant and not knowing who's baby it is. But it didn't work for my story. Now I'm double-eager to find out where you'll take the story.

Oh, and I totally vote for Morgan to kill Kevin!

Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: Jul 03, 2008 - 11:07 pm · For: Chapter 3

I totally loved this! What can I say, she forgot about Kevin, thought that Derek didn't want to have a relationship and then... I loved how Kevin stepped in. Again off to read on.

Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: Jul 03, 2008 - 10:57 pm · For: Chapter 2

I agree, oh, my God! That was hot! *off to take a cold shower*

Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: Jul 03, 2008 - 10:38 pm · For: Chapter 1

Wow, what a way to let Derek save the day! That was great!