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Name: ROSSELLA1 (Signed) · Date: Oct 20, 2010 - 04:56 am · For: The Red Eye Of Providence
I think a confrontation between Emily and Foyet or Hotch and Foyet would be good.


Name: Pharmawriter on LJ (Anonymous) · Date: Aug 09, 2010 - 06:38 pm · For: The Red Eye Of Providence
Just stumbled across this story courtesy of the BAU Inbox on Livejournal. Ch 1 is riveting - the as yet unexplained but significant dream, the unsettling invasion, and the resulting question of what the *** is going to happen.

I love your prose style; I can actually SEE the full setting - something I don't always do when reading fiction - and some turns of phrase are evocative, particularly the description of the piece of paper on which Foyet's note is written.

The good thing about missing this earlier is that now I can read several chapters at once!

Author's Response: Hi, Pharmawriter; thanks for deciding to stop by and check out my work. I'm glad you like it. :-)


Name: Jennifer (Anonymous) · Date: Aug 03, 2010 - 08:08 am · For: The Red Eye Of Providence
Amazing story. I'm going to go and sit here in the corner and twitch until you update again

Author's Response: Hi, Jennifer! Thanks for stopping by. I'm glad you like it. :-)


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