Name: Crazy4CM (Anonymous) · Date: Apr 27, 2011 - 02:20 pm · For: Chapter 1- Salty tears

OMG! SWEEEET CHAPTER!

Name: 21Morgan (Anonymous) · Date: Apr 11, 2011 - 04:34 pm · For: Chapter 1- Salty tears

Woow o.o Great chapter! Poor Garcia.

Name: EZgirl (Anonymous) · Date: Mar 30, 2011 - 06:10 pm · For: Chapter 1- Salty tears

Sweeeet chp xP

Name: StealHorse (Anonymous) · Date: Mar 30, 2011 - 03:42 pm · For: Chapter 1- Salty tears

Sweeet Chap love it! I read this chap b4 but didnt review at first b/c I got abit annoyed by u using "Penelope," alot.....but whn I re-read this chap I noticed ya fixed the chap up abit. I thnk u alot for that hehe ty ty ty!!!! So I command ya on that n again grt, grt chapter!!!!!!
Keep it up!!!!!

Name: Hollywood (Anonymous) · Date: Mar 28, 2011 - 04:38 pm · For: Chapter 1- Salty tears

Sweeeeet chapter!

Name: Pari (Signed) · Date: Mar 26, 2011 - 05:26 am · For: Chapter 1- Salty tears

I'm going to give some constructive criticism here.This is a really good story idea, but you should send it to a beta who can help you with writing it. I found this first chapter a bit distracting in that you kept say 'Penelope', 'Penelope'. It wasn't necessary to use her name so much. use 'she' and 'her' sometimes.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review xDD

Name: Ms. Smarty (Anonymous) · Date: Mar 26, 2011 - 12:41 am · For: Chapter 1- Salty tears

Awwwww......
Poooor Garcia v.v
Great chapter tho xP

Name: LoveCM (Anonymous) · Date: Mar 22, 2011 - 12:04 am · For: Chapter 1- Salty tears

OMG love this chap

Name: ScarletKent (Signed) · Date: Mar 21, 2011 - 02:50 pm · For: Chapter 1- Salty tears

Wow o.o I really love this chapter n this story so far. I feel so bad for Garcia. Man Mike must b sucha ass. Keep this up! Love it XD

Author's Response: Owwww ty so much...it really means alot to meh XD

Name: I (Anonymous) · Date: Mar 21, 2011 - 02:40 pm · For: Chapter 1- Salty tears

Owwwwwwwww pooor Garcia!!! I feel soooo bad for her....Mike is sucha a-hole for making her feel so horrible. I really hope that Morgan can help her through the hard times and save her from the bastard!
Great chapter I