|bcktolife||04/19/2008 - 03:07 pm||17: CHAPTER 16 –ONE MORE TIME… ONE LAST TRY.||Anonymous|
|Btw, congrats on your upcoming wedding!!!|
Author's Response: thanks its a freaking load of my mind now i can relax and write again. i think my speech is probably long as a chapter lol....
|bcktolife||04/19/2008 - 03:04 pm||17: CHAPTER 16 –ONE MORE TIME… ONE LAST TRY.||Anonymous|
|I knew it! I knew something was 'different' about Van and Hank's relationship. They shared everything, even showers, wow. lol This has been one long arduous journey but I've enjoyed the ride. I'm glad they gave it one more try, one last time.|
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed and stuck around to find out what the ending would be like. lets hope you like the others,. how are you ? you still watching OLTL?
|wwefanforlife||04/15/2008 - 12:14 pm||17: CHAPTER 16 –ONE MORE TIME… ONE LAST TRY.||Signed|
|I'm happy they finaly got it together. I like hank lol he funny. Also good luck with everything sexy I hope it works out for you thanks for the udpated. |
Author's Response: thanks i hope it works out well to , no rain and lot of sun and no snow though snow would be nice but hey ... let teh wedding begin and as for hank well i liked him to.
|avis11611||04/11/2008 - 09:48 pm||16: CHAPTER 15 – IF I DON’T GET YOUR LOVE NOW I KNOW I AM GOING TO CRY.||Anonymous|
|this was so good, Hank was really a surprise, looking forward to reading the next chapter.|
Author's Response: well thanks then. and you know how i like to do with all my stories from time to time throw in the surprises.
|Angel||03/08/2008 - 06:13 pm||15: CHAPTER 14 – ONE NIGHT OF PLEASURE PT 2 - THE CONFESSION, THE REJECTION AND THE PAIN||Anonymous|
|Well damn. Great sex and a broken heart. |
Author's Response: well tahts just the way it goes sometimes. lol
|bcktolife||02/21/2008 - 04:54 pm||15: CHAPTER 14 – ONE NIGHT OF PLEASURE PT 2 - THE CONFESSION, THE REJECTION AND THE PAIN||Anonymous|
|Good grief! Could they be any more complicated, and confusing?! I mean really! lol So, Van didn't feel a damn thing? She's a cold-blooded woman - at least where John McBain is concerned - who's curiosity got the best of her and now she's ready to wed another man? Well...okay, stranger things have happened. I can't blame Van for kicking him to curb b/c let's face it, that's exactly what he did to her but damn, can't they just get along! LOL |
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: lol she isn't cold she just isn't giving him what he wants and she needs to make sure he pays a bit . nah they just can't get along van wants to make an example out of him
|wwefanforlife||02/20/2008 - 01:48 pm||15: CHAPTER 14 – ONE NIGHT OF PLEASURE PT 2 - THE CONFESSION, THE REJECTION AND THE PAIN||Signed|
|OH my I can't belive this they have this great night and she stills going with that jerk. Dam john can't win lol. I'm glad to see you have updated.thanks for the updated.|
Author's Response: hey hanks a better guy than john woudl be in her books lol.... if only though hank was ...?
|bcktolife||01/17/2008 - 08:21 pm||14: CHAPTER 13 - ONE NIGHT OF PLEASURE||Anonymous|
|Boy, we're getting closer aren't we? lol Thanks for the update SB.|
Author's Response: yup so hang in there..lol
|BCg||01/16/2008 - 09:17 am||14: CHAPTER 13 - ONE NIGHT OF PLEASURE||Anonymous|
|First off Congrats Luv,|
Secondly I would say I am gonna kill you...but i am pretty sure you have gotten a ton of them and are quite use to them.....
So good work but come on pick up the dayum pace some SB...your killing me over here.
Author's Response: hey slow down.. you'll get what you are wanting.. lol slow down
|avis11611||11/13/2007 - 04:54 pm||13: CHAPTER 12 –I KNOW AND YOU DON’T KNOW.||Anonymous|
|finally, we are all ready for either some earth shaking activities.|
Author's Response: lol... earth shattering you say lol m8 i don't know if i can deliver that in this you know.
|wwefanforlife||11/13/2007 - 02:26 am||13: CHAPTER 12 –I KNOW AND YOU DON’T KNOW.||Signed|
|Wow so they are going to do it. I wish they both stop being stubborn and amited they wanted and love each other. thanks for the updated.|
Author's Response: yes
|bcktolife||11/12/2007 - 11:17 pm||13: CHAPTER 12 –I KNOW AND YOU DON’T KNOW.||Anonymous|
|This has got to be one hellava hookup! I mean the earth should move off its axis when these two love birds finally connect. lol One question: shouldn't there have been more than John and her fiance present during the DNA test? As I recall, there was another stud, maybe two, that swam in those waters as well.|
I'm glad you've updated this story; its been a long journey for a short story but I've enjoyed every minute of it.
Author's Response: sorry but real life just stepped in teh wedding thing was really getting to me because he was like make sure and make sure. we're getting married here in london first then we''re going tohave a smaller ceromony in the caribbean for family that could't make it so its a heck of a schedule i am workingw ith . it has to be right
Author's Response: in resposne to teh question,..... noshe narrowed it down she is 99 percent sure that the father either is john or dominic.
|BCG||11/02/2007 - 05:26 am||12: CHAPTER 11 – INVITATION TO AN AUCTION PT2– THE LAST BID||Anonymous|
|Dayum one more freaking problem to throw into this mess of theirs....|
Still want to strangle the both of them....
Cricket..lol...what a name its has to be a nickname..lol...
I see you still luv cliffhangers....lol....And i still hate the dayum things....But so much was said and heard this chapter and the last still makes me wonder about Eva.
Personal John needs to start playing the game alot better....And Date someone that will just annoy her someone that is always chasing behind Eva but never really getting one up on her. Someone that will make her start looking at the glass half full instead of half empty.
Anyways welcome back Sexy....Nice to see you havent lost your touch. Will i havent seen that part that we argue but yet. Awesome chapters tho.
Author's Response: lol well where is teh suspense and i liek you on teh edge of your seat ... admit it you like teh cliffhangers
|Quita||11/01/2007 - 11:20 am||12: CHAPTER 11 – INVITATION TO AN AUCTION PT2– THE LAST BID||Anonymous|
|Glad to see this story update! I hope the baby isn't John's b/c that will just throw another problem with him Evangeline. |
Author's Response: thanks me too. i am trying wheni am not to busy. wedding wedding is all i am hearuing. well a little problem makes em strionger
|wwefanforlife||10/31/2007 - 12:11 am||12: CHAPTER 11 – INVITATION TO AN AUCTION PT2– THE LAST BID||Signed|
|Hell naw she drop one hell of a bomb shell on him and that girl is a slut. Glad you updated now if we can only get bcg to do something we be great. thanks for the updated and welcome back it been a long time. I hope not the dad|
Author's Response: thanks i will try not to stay away as long.. she a slut ain't she?