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| Billie | 05/09/2007 - 01:34 pm | 1: In One Act | Anonymous |
| Great short. Thank you for giving us this scene. |
| Ayisa | 04/30/2007 - 12:00 pm | 1: In One Act | Anonymous |
| This was absolutely beautiful! I was almost in tears, until I read the end. It would be so perfect if the last year and a half had all been a horrible nightmare. You are a fantastic writer, and any soap would be completely redeemed with a writer like you on their staff. I know I'd watch!!! And since that hack DH has completely massacred what used to be a fairly well written show, that's no small feat!! Great job. Thanks for sharing your talent. |
| kaelleigh | 04/29/2007 - 09:08 am | 1: In One Act | Anonymous |
Absolutely amazing. I didn't breathe until the end. Wow.
Thanks so much for sharing this. |
| Traci | 04/29/2007 - 08:55 am | 1: In One Act | Anonymous |
| Thanks for the story! It's a nice touch to accent the John/Evangeline love story that somehow OLTL was unable or unwilling to tell. This is the relationship that only true John/Evangeline fans saw on our screens. |
| Quita | 04/28/2007 - 10:01 pm | 1: In One Act | Anonymous |
| Girl that was beautiful! I started crying towards the end but I love the ending. Thanks for the story and I wish DH would play it like this. |
| Rosanna | 04/28/2007 - 02:42 pm | 1: In One Act | Anonymous |
| If only it would happen like this..if only..this would be so great!! Losing Evangeline would be John's worst nightmare..I mean completely losing her.. |
| passionflfie | 04/28/2007 - 05:02 am | 1: In One Act | Anonymous |
| Oh that was GREAT I Love it. |
| WWEFANFORLIFE | 04/27/2007 - 10:19 pm | 1: In One Act | Anonymous |
| girl you had me scared but you would make a good head writer. I like it and the line making mermories nice touch. |
| Bradley | 04/27/2007 - 08:11 pm | 1: In One Act | Anonymous |
Ooooooo Marceline! I thought some one was going to be bold enough to "kill" off our fair heroine! But I'm glad that you didn't! I don't think I could have stomach it! Excellent job lady... Look forward to more stories by you.
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| BCg | 04/27/2007 - 05:57 pm | 1: In One Act | Anonymous |
| Loved it ...you had me shed a tear dang it ...i hate when you guys do that...but i loved the ending more then ending on how she was still alive...you hired you can have DH's job the Witch sucks....got to go...peace out...jules |
| sexy bitch | 04/27/2007 - 04:13 pm | 1: In One Act | Anonymous |
| you're hired. damn why couldn't they do a reality show for an apprentice soap writer. damn you could take it easily.great story. |
| Kathy | 04/27/2007 - 03:48 pm | 1: In One Act | Anonymous |
When I was told to read this, I was curious to see how someone else wanted/hoped (whatever) the coma story to play out when John goes to see E (if he gets to see her). The parts about memories and the photos she took of him on his birthday was like being sucker punched in the gut. I always enjoy reading jovan's memories/conversation being interwoven into the story. it makes that much more heartbroken.
The ending wasn't what i expected. I was hoping she'd die but it was sweet. |
| Cammie | 04/27/2007 - 03:39 pm | 1: In One Act | Anonymous |
| OMG you've got me in tears.That was heart wrenching and so beautiful.I need the next chapter soo.But first you need to go take DH's job away from her.Great chapter. |
| bcktolife | 04/27/2007 - 02:56 pm | 1: In One Act | Anonymous |
| Oh Marcie....you got me on this one girl. Got a sista all choked up; a tear maybe two fell from my eyeballs but I'm feeling much better "starting right now". (loved that) |
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