|scyren||02/22/2013 - 10:22 pm||1: Chapter 1:||Signed|
|Awesome read! Please finish!|
|Mochagirl||12/09/2011 - 01:41 pm||1: Chapter 1:||Anonymous|
|PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!...finish this story..I LOVE IT!!!|
|wwefanforlife||09/06/2010 - 06:19 pm||18: Chapter 18||Anonymous|
|i'm glad they are alive and hope they stay that way to finshe what they came to started. love how john look at her everytime with love thanks for the updated.|
|bcktolife||10/18/2008 - 11:28 am||18: Chapter 18||Anonymous|
|Corbin: I'm surprised he's in cahoots with Brye. Wonder what he's working on? Does Niah have a slight interest in Corbin? mmmm The thought of 'not' being attracted to him may indicate otherwise.|
Mainak/Verene: She's his mother; she's been there, unseen, watching over him and now she's desperate to save her son. Can you blame her? Wonder what his reaction will be if/when he learns the truth.
Ren/Kane: Ren's kick-ass cool. I like that about her. And Kane...well...he needs someone doesn't he.
The Gang: Their scenes were tense. Fighting those Anthropods on that cliff gave me the heebie geebies (scared of heights-shhh, don’t tell anyone), especially during the realm of nothingness. The princess is more than brave. She wasn’t born for the throne, at least not Ageyi’s so-called noble hierarchy. No, she was destined to be John’s Warrior Queen.
Wow! You were holding back/saving up weren't you? Update's great! But lawd you're killing me with the buildup. lol That’s ok, I'm anxiously, and patiently, waiting for "the" chapter. Seems like everyone: kings, queens, demons, warriors, peasants, misfits, you name it are descending on Kelfar. There has got to be justice for the Morgan Clan, Patrick most of all.
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for leaving the reviews. I always enjoy reading them. Been slow with the updates....I a try to make them worth the wait.....looks like I succeeded :-) Take care and God Bless
|sexy bitch||08/16/2008 - 10:03 pm||17: Chapter 17||Signed|
|ok so this plot just got deeper for me. secondly is estee and lorn hooking up? lol evangeline and john still on track and damn why did patrick do that to kendall? is jason going to have to save her ass or is it going to be ish? damn i hope this don't tear jason and his new love they good together.|
|bcktolife||07/20/2008 - 01:55 pm||17: Chapter 17||Anonymous|
|Wow! This chapter was chock full of good stuff so where do I begin. The thing that impressed me the most is the determination exhibited throughout the scenes. Most are scared as they continue onward albeit brave none the less. I’m glad the team listened to Evangeline’s thoughts about the “escapee” and I’m also glad that John didn’t listen when she suggested he leave her. (Is she crazy?!) One of the moments that stand out is the conversation with Jonah. Evangeline’s poise and compassion is unwavering; she’s true royalty. And her prince is forever the regal warrior. Patrick clocking Kendall on the head was unexpected – I loved it! Kendall’s cool, certainly not a saint but I just think she’s had a rough go of it and undue criticism.|
Time has run out for Zandul, Xavier, Lilith and all their evildoers. Who will perish and who be the victor has yet to be revealed, however, it’s going to be a fantastic showdown! I can’t wait for the family reunion!!!
Two things: 1) I thought Kel and Jace were both males and 2) where are Layla, Mainak and Enexhi?
|Cmami||07/18/2008 - 05:43 pm||17: Chapter 17||Anonymous|
|yes they have reached the city now lets let the arse kicking commence.....|
|wwefanforlife||07/16/2008 - 03:44 pm||17: Chapter 17||Signed|
|Wow so everyone wanted xavier the people of the city john jason and patrick. There so close to their father and don't know it yet and can't wait to see what happen next. I hope they find their father and then kill Xavier thanks for the updated.|
|JoVanfan4evr||05/26/2008 - 04:47 am||16: Chapter 16||Signed|
|Happy Memorial Day,|
Wanted to let you know that I am still reading and enjoying this story. Your imagination is amazing to come up with all the names of tribes, people etc. I like seeing this J/E.
Author's Response: I hope your holiday was relaxing and enjoyable. Thank you so much for the review. I really cannot express how wonderful it is to be able to bring my stories to this site and have my work appreciated as much as it has been here.
|bcktolife||05/24/2008 - 01:24 pm||16: Chapter 16||Anonymous|
|What Ren's doing for her child is compendable. She still have feelings for Cole. How could you not? Wonder how Cole's going to react to the news.|
I knew I like Verene the instant she saved Mainak and crew. And now we know who and what she is she's even more intriquing to me.
Kane my man, Ishara's hopelessly in love with another. She's gonna break you heart even more boo.
Patrick's made of that good stuff isn't he! He's definately got more than nine lives. Didn't see Kendall being the one to his rescue; what an interesting twist.
My favorite part was watching the scenes in the car: John driving silently, holding his lady's hand, Van scared and more determined to be by her man's side, Ishara, Jason but the most compelling moment was the resounding communication between the brothers. Spoken words could not have conveyed the depths of trust and devotion more than the blue-eyed reflections in the mirror. Awesome.
Well, here they are...on the pathway to their destiny. I can't wait. Thanks for the update, you never disappoint.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.....you never disappoint either. They are always entertaining! Take Care!
|Karina||05/18/2008 - 05:44 am||16: Chapter 16||Anonymous|
|Awww loved the hand holding during the drive between John/Van,great chapter can't wait till the next one.|
Author's Response: Thank you for dropping me a review....glad you enjoyed the chapter. Take care and God bless!
|wwefanforlife||05/17/2008 - 02:20 pm||16: Chapter 16||Signed|
|wow john and jason are so close to see their father and they don't know it. I'm gald the father it out of harms way for now and can't wait to see sons and father together again. thanks for the updated.|
|wwefanforlife||04/23/2008 - 12:37 am||15: Chapter 15||Signed|
|Well I'm glad van showed john something new by praying and they work as a team and the mom finlay getting it. I wish cole be quiet for a mintue and let maria tell him about his son lol. So here they go and they find the answer they need. Thanks for the updated.|
Author's Response: Hey WWE...as always thank you for the review. Dawn
|bcktolife||04/22/2008 - 11:50 pm||15: Chapter 15||Anonymous|
|Gurl!! The fight was off da chain!!! Heart-pounding action, drama, suspense, its all there. I know your m.o. is to update Extreme Measures next but puhleeze update this one, again, and soon!!! *smiles* Excellent, excellent chapter. Well worth the wait.|
|bcktolife||01/27/2008 - 06:02 pm||14: Chapter 14||Anonymous|
|Wow! That was one helluva fight! Very visual, descriptive. Nice job. Mainak, Enexhi and Sivana to their pop's rescue. That was a nice twist, loved it!|
“No one lets Evangeline do anything. She is of her own mind”. ~~~ You tell her John! Man, he had Niah's number didn't he? Give it up Niah, the man's in love with your daughter. I'm also enjoying the bond between the 'family': Cole, Sonny, John, Jason, Ishara, Van, etc.
Run, Patrick, Run! Lillith should've fallen into the abyss...no love lost here for her - she reminds me of a certain redhead who shall remain nameless. lol
Dawn, I'm on pins and needles here girl, I'm rooting for Sael and his clan to defeat Zandul (love me some Mainak *wink*). We still have unresolved issues - Cole and his son, Kendall, Kane, the mystery of the other royal family, etc, etc, but I cannot wait for the Kelfar showdown. Let's get ready to rumble!!!!