|2Shay||07/18/2012 - 03:44 pm||6: Chapter 5||Signed|
|I would love to read more of this.|
|kayla||08/25/2011 - 12:39 am||6: Chapter 5||Anonymous|
|JoVanfan4evr||08/20/2011 - 05:43 pm||1: Prologue||Signed|
|Wonderful update, hope to see more soon!|
|Anonymous||08/17/2011 - 09:08 am||6: Chapter 5||Anonymous|
|I absolutely love this story!! Glad to see it updated and can't wait for me! I haven't watched the show in years so this story is just what I need!!!|
|sexy bitch||08/16/2008 - 08:41 pm||5: Chapter 4||Anonymous|
|wow its good to be back here after so long its been like years ain't it m8's. anyways i am loving teh climax to this story but i'm waiting for the twist where van will start getting bits of her memory back of course via todd, her family and other ppl as to why she kicked john out but in the end i hope to see her give them nother chance and if there isn't twist of fates like that to come then hey all i can say is i can't wait for the enxt chapter.|
|Peaches||08/12/2008 - 06:00 am||5: Chapter 4||Anonymous|
|I love this story, Pari! I could def. see this conversation happening! You captured everyone perfectly! Can't wait to read more!|
|bcktolife||08/10/2008 - 12:54 pm||5: Chapter 4||Anonymous|
|Yeah Van! Get your man back gurl! John...opportunity is lip-locking your face man, don't blow it!|
|bcktolife||08/10/2008 - 12:12 pm||4: Chapter 3||Anonymous|
|“I’m not alone. John’s here.” Evangeline stated as they all turned their attention to the man still leaning against the door. “Can you stay?”|
“For as long as you want me.” He answered and Evangeline had to swallow down the instinctual words, ‘I’ll always want you.’ Which nearly fell from her lips.
Loved that part. Loved how he's by her side, helping her, supporting her the way he should've instead of...oh well, that part of their love story is DEAD! Good riddance. Now we need to get rid of the other two clowns then its all good.
|Karen~worthfightingfor||08/09/2008 - 11:48 pm||5: Chapter 4||Anonymous|
|This is excellent, I can't wait until the next chapter. It has me sitting on the edge of my seat. To see how each of Van's suitor's go about getting her to remember what they meant to her, and to see which will stop at nothing to bring back love that they want despererately from this angel. I hope John and Van have the love story that was meant to be. Now that Mama and Layla have caught them, I want more! |
|passionflife||08/02/2008 - 11:02 am||5: Chapter 4||Anonymous|
|So happy to see a update oh I should I'm exciting. Love that John is there for Evangeline and they aren't holding back and tell me why Layla had to walk in on hott moment.|
I glad Evangeline seen the joke in being in love with cristan and her relationship with Todd but I glad she point out what and who she want.
Thanks for the update alway happy to see it. Please keep it coming and I love the new skin.
|Williamssiters79||07/26/2008 - 10:26 pm||5: Chapter 4||Signed|
|Being busted by her family sucks but I loved the update|
|Williamssiters79||07/26/2008 - 10:21 pm||4: Chapter 3||Signed|
|Our girl is lost love the way she acted towards cris can't wait for the next read|
|wwefanforlife||07/25/2008 - 12:05 am||5: Chapter 4||Signed|
|Dam they were getting hot and heavy and layla stop it lol. I thought it was funny how todd and cris were fighting to funny. Love the close moments btween john and van thanks for the updated.|
|wwefanforlife||07/23/2008 - 02:11 am||4: Chapter 3||Signed|
|lol all three men in the same room this is going to be good. I love how john is there for van and supporting her. thanks for the updated|
|darkskin51||07/22/2008 - 07:05 pm||2: Chapter 1||Anonymous|
|wow, about sums it up.|